(Ethereal Nation)(The Antidote Project)
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Original: 6/15/2005 1:00 PM
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Wednesday, June 15, 2005

 

Hey Media

Media media
rock me
and tell me what to care about
because i'm so tired
and all i want to do is sleep inside
the windows i stare at all day long

Hey media
tell me what I’m thinking
and cure this disease
of placid faces
staring blank and pale
back at me

Media media
rock me to sleep
to dream dreams of you
in this world of light
all I want to do is sleep inside
the windows I stare at all day long
tell me what I’m dreaming
who I’m loving
and I’m loving you more
when you tell me to
tell me to love you

 Posted 6/15/2005 1:00 PM - 51 Views - 8 eProps - 4 comments

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i didn't know you were doing this again.
Posted 6/22/2005 5:54 PM by habichuela - reply

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The singy songy feel of this poem and its use of repetition is perfect for the theme. The sound of the poem lulls the reader into the sleepy state of sustained media attention. And the lack of vivid imagery and metaphor also adds to the state.

Well done. 

Posted 7/25/2005 8:48 PM by In_Relief - reply

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i love this. LOVE IT. readsumofmypoems...? kthanks.

p.s. keep up the good work.

Posted 1/14/2006 11:53 PM by Relations_Remain - reply

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positive perfection.   would you like to join the party???

B. ~_~

Posted 3/5/2006 3:37 PM by fantasydreamer333 - reply


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